why do people travel?
"Travel makes one modest. you see what a tiny place you occupy in the world". Said by Gustave Flaubert. In my perspective idea travel is the alike window to another word, therefore open-minded traveler person. There are many varies reasons why people concern to travel, for instance: insecurity situation, improving education, work, recreation, etc. Which have great advantage and disadvantage for the passenger? One of the main points regarding travel in our country is immigration. Cause of problems which exist in our environments such as natural disaster ( famine, flood) and unnatural ( insecurity condition), which brought great disadvantage in the high rate of refugees to the neighborhood and remote countries. while they don't use to strange culture, accordingly they have to fight to break down the barriers that faced in the way. to obtain a better living and privileges which they didn't access in their home. Despite a lot educated persons in our country, unfortunately, we couldn't obtain independently of others and there are not outstanding doctors who could diagnosis some serious illnesses and also cure cancers. so people have to refer to neighborhood countries for treatment. It is the great point that they find their healthiness, but the great disadvantage is they lose a lot of money and time, also they tolerance many challenges in the way. My favorite reason for travel is travel for education. the biggest impact of education in another country is cultural exchange to enhance mutual understanding and friendship between the folks of different nations. also, pave the way for the alumnus to find a good job which they deserve. For conclusion, despite advantage and disadvantage, from my perspective idea travel is one of the finest things on the earth. Because it extends perception in passenger's mind. and I would like to finish my essay with this nice quote " Don't listen to what say, Go see" Gustave Flaubert.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 313.0 196.424390244 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23003194888 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92692562413 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 106.607317073 178% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607028753994 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 283.868780488 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7541717505 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1578947368 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4736842105 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158848253629 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510541731992 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747871849126 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158848253629 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 40.7170731707 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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