Many People believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals & society to what extent do you agree?
Based on he recent survey, it has observed that people spend around half of time of a day on various social networking websites, and the rate is increasing an alarming rate. I strongly assert that excessive use of social networking sites have tremendous negative impact on social as well personal life of an individual and as a society whole.
There are ample reasons to elaborate on the same, to begin with connecting to unknown people on these sites is one type of threat to individual's social as well as personal life, as people have tendency to upload their personal details such as addresses, telephone numbers, picture on the websites. Some ill minded people take advantage of these and misutilise the information for their personal benefits. Many a times we read in news paper in regard of banking fraud or some threat or coercion. Secondly, due to excess use of these sites either on cell phones, laptops or desktop people these days almost spent no time for physical exercise or outdoor activity which ultimately leads to unhealthy life and invite to certain life threatening disease such obesity or diabetes.
Moreover,because of these websites people have almost lost physical connection with their near ones. Now on special occasion such as birthdays, marriages or on anniversaries people prefer to wish on social platform only rather then personally meet, which widens the gap among them.
Some people tend to believe that because of these sites they saved lot of time of socialising and in indirect way it saves costs for them. They argue that we can connect with everyone 24*7, which earlier was not possible.
To put in a nutshell, i pen down saying that negative impacts on people's life have far more negative impact as compare to positive one, and we really need to keep ourselves in some control or limit for use of these websites.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...sonal benefits. Many a times we read in news paper in regard of banking fraud or some thre...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...ease such obesity or diabetes. Moreover,because of these websites people have almost lo...
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Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... to wish on social platform only rather then personally meet, which widens the gap a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...as not possible. To put in a nutshell, i pen down saying that negative impacts o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92651757188 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59264732804 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581469648562 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.8769157772 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4545454545 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214458440233 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845233128187 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752153883897 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124743223396 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628354131348 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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