It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Family has always been an indispensable part of our lives and no one can replace the family members with any other person. In my opinion, a good family can always fill up the place of a friendship. However, having good friends also plays a major role in one's life.
Primarily, a person inherits his character and disposition from his family. Presence of family members creates a wholesome atmosphere. A person feels more secure and supported in family. For example, if you are staying away from your family, you might need to handle various situations by yourself. Parents' love is unconditional and irreplaceable. After spending stressful and busy working hours, we need a solace which is possible if we live in a close knit family. Therefore, people having good family are considered to be very fortunate and it can be said that family takes precedence over friendship.
On the other hand, it is also undeniable that true friendship is necessary in life. Whenever we are in trouble, a family's support is always there. But in some situations, good friends can be more helpful. There are several issues which cannot be discussed with parents but can be freely shared with friends. For instance, for career problems we can not completely count on our family. Work related issues can be dealt with the help of friends or co-workers. This is the reason why friendship is absolutely important for us.
In conclusion, although good family can cover up for anything, but good friendship is also essential. People need support and love at every point of life. To survive in modern life, we should have a balanced relationship with both family and acquaintances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...good friends also plays a major role in ones life. Primarily, a person inherits h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98201438849 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78353356485 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7807583286 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.25 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321653865762 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941054066206 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758256895094 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21161128052 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343755241197 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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