In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside.
Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?
Housing spaces in the cities are overpopulated and are slowly spreading towards the exteriors. A part of the populous believes that the suburban areas should be guarded against becoming an extension of the concrete forest. I opine that it is vital to balance nature and propose alternative housing solutions.
On one hand, a majority of people want to build housing facilities in the outskirts of town, to compensate for the shortage of living spaces in the city centers, which are extremely crowded. They are willing to make lifestyle changes and commute daily- to and fro, to the corporate parks which are away from such remote areas. For instance, building houses and the relevant infrastructure like roads and public transportation will lead to deforestation, and this will affect the environment.
On the other hand, some people believe that the less populated localities should be restricted from building any more houses, to balance the ecosystem. Open landscapes and water-bodies need to be protected against pollution and further destruction for accommodation purposes. For example, many rivers have been filled to create more land for construction which is harmful to nature.
In my view, the government should come up with substitutes such as flat systems, apartments- sharing, local hostels, and youth homes to accommodate its citizens effectively. Localities should be made aware of Global warming which is caused due to depletion in the natural reserves, overpopulation, and pollution.
In conclusion, people should collectively save the natural environment and discourage any kind of endangerment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...s the exteriors. A part of the populous believes that the suburban areas should be guard...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53413654618 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08636563162 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7366728121 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148614383879 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479141677268 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407875021582 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683875219866 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501063146398 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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