Task -2
Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they have married or single.
Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.
At least 250 words.
Employees are often enquired of their private details, including their extracurricular activities and their marital status. Some consider this information unnecessary, while others take no offense to it. In my opinion, a company should only be entitled to information about the job requirement.
On one hand, some professionals have no objection with regard to providing their personal information for a mandatory background check. It is a procedure essentially carried out to avoid frauds and malpractices of any kind. Personal data is collected to redeem private benefits, for example, a company may sponsor a holiday for an efficient performer and his family. Verification of personal information to make sure their authenticity enables an organization to choose the most suitable candidates.
On the other hand, a majority of the working class consider submitting queries about themselves, as privacy is intruded. Companies must also sign a privacy contract to safeguard their employees from any threat. They opine that such information creates a biased attitude among an organization. This is unhealthy for a good work environment. For instance, a colleague could be disrespectful towards his subordinate on knowing his unfortunate family background.
In my view, employees must coöperate with their work authority and follow rules that ensure their safety and offer other employee benefits. I believe there is a distinction between personal and professional life. Opportunities are created if the organization is aware of the capabilities and talents its workforce possesses. A good example could be of organizations, annually felicitated the extraordinary performers and create a platform for others to exhibit their hobbies.
A successful organization will always focus on the pertinent skill required to function smoothly and follow a good work ethic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71684587814 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29583876323 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623655913978 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6046914632 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.8235294118 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213970903092 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644088291391 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043656858433 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108212506786 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575089205267 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.