You travelled abroad and faced some problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say .
- Give your flight details
- what was the problem you had faced.
- suggest some improvements for the future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am frequent traveller of Jet Airways and I am also platinum member of jet privilege. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction at the airport when I was on vacation trip to Dubai.
Let me explain in more detail. It so happened that I was travelling by 9W 6 , as this is one of the flight which I prefer the most as it travels without an halt and convenient service provided by the cabin crew. When I landed at Dubai airport, I was waiting to collect my luggage. After spending an hour, I received my Blue colour suitcase. When I was unpacking my luggage after reaching hotel, I found that the belongings in the suitcase was of some female member. I verified the luggage tag in which my details were printed. I called the lost and found airport authorities and explained the incident. They asked me to submit the bag at the airport and will proceed further. I received the luggage 2 days after reporting my complaint.
I would suggest you to open the check in counter early so that, this incident could be avoided in the future and provide proper training to the staff for tagging luggage.
Yours faithfully,
Saurabh Dumbre
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o happened that I was travelling by 9W 6 , as this is one of the flight which I pr...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...I prefer the most as it travels without an halt and convenient service provided by...
^^
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...open the check in counter early so that, this incident could be avoided in the fu...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57416267943 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63898901827 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5850852802 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5384615385 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201235613328 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630257640842 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446327976895 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113807062265 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289056161316 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.