If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study what would you choose. Explain your choice using specific reasons and details.
As a matter of fact, I am studying engineering and I am majoring in environment and energy. So if I could study a subject that I have never had the opportunity to learn about, I would choose one which does not concerned directly science but whom my scientific background may help me understand it better.
History has always attracted me because it can help us understand where human being came from and how we evolve. My background in chemistry may help me understand the methods used by archaeological. In my opinion, it’s all the more meaningful to really understand how something is found.
Moreover, I would love to learn more about the Ancient Time period, specifically about the Egyptians. Knowing to describe hieroglyphs would be as interesting as understanding the hierarchy of gods at that time. Human kind has evolved thanks to Egyptians and I would love to know what we kept from them and how they help us with construction. History appealed me because our earth has millions of years and it helps us get that the modern society has not always been as we know. What we think is normal today was a huge invention once. And actually Egyptians have discovered how to build pyramids while we do not even know how to reproduce them. I love the history about pyramids, I am passionate about this !
To conclude, I would love to study the history of Egyptian because I think they brought a lot to our society and lots of things that is happening nowadays may be understandable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 298, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...ic background may help me understand it better. History has always attracted me bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, i think, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76153846154 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88333969102 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3468596898 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117494203699 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04327965112 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500624745618 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819982720372 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680880843425 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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