Some people think it is alright to spend money for their wants, such as a new car or the latest gadget. Others think it is better to save their money and only buy what they really need. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples in your answer.
In the modern world, people have to maintain their standard according to their society. I am agree with people save their money for future and spend money when it really require. Following essay, I have explored the facts with various reasons.
Firstly, nowadays people relay to live easy life and for that, they need basic accessories. In other words, we always thought about the bank balance. Moreover, people invest their money in different areas. such as some people invest money in mutual funds, LIC policy and share market. I would say that, they spend money to buy necessary things instead of spend money without any requirement. Furthermore, people believe in plans. they make the fixed deposit for their family or for children. Because we never know when we need money. it is true that if we are working in private sector, job securities is very less. so according to my opinion we have to save money whether in share or in mutual fund need to save our future.
Secondly, people wants to give elegant life to their children such as they have to provide better education and good courses for their career. so that they begin to save money for their family need and future retirement. Therefore, consequently, people spend money when they really need. Many people think that they wish to enjoy life with their comfort. thought, it is vital to save money to overcome from the difficult situation.
In conclusion, as everyone know that money is necessary for future expenses. Ether people save money or not, but they need mandatory things. so this essay analysis the various reason, why people should keep money for future and spend for only really needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96113074205 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28501451055 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530035335689 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5473303757 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.8571428571 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4761904762 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441581307543 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139957625782 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822710353777 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296939902921 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521795078772 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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