The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the .ain features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The tables below give information about sales of fair trade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the .ain features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables compare sales figures of bananas and "Fairtrade-labelled" coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five different European countries .

As it is seen from the 1st table, the turnover of the coffee significantly increased in 5 years in all countries, though in the various degrees. In 1999, coffee sales was 1.5 millions of euros in the uk. it took off to 20 millions of euros in 2004 and as a result, the Great Britain became a leader in coffee consumption. During the same time period trade volume of coffee in switzerland and in belgium are almost doubled and in 2004 were 6 and 1.7, correspondingly, however the increase in figures of Denmark and Sweden was unremarkable.

When it comes to bananas, its sales volume went up as a whole, although in Sweden and in Denmark it declined. In 2004 sales figures for bananas in these 2 countries was half that of in 1999, about 1 millions of euro. However, other 3 countries experienced a rise in bananas consumption. Despite the fact that the most increase witnessed in belgium (more than 6 times), followed by the uk (about 5 times), in 2004 switzerland maintained its leadership with the figures of 47 million euro.

In summary, there is a significant growth in sales of both bananas and coffee in countries as a whole, while the vast majority of trade volume accounts for switzerland and the uk, taken together.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in summary, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22784534348 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512711864407 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4299523624 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.4 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207626765996 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910225472761 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669152469228 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145867902714 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063986111663 0.0819641961636 78% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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