Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Should some people migrate to a new country where they have to speak a foreign language, they will consider some problems related to not only social but also practical issues. For my perspective, I either agree with this statement to a certain extent or also digress due to lots of discussions below.
Regarding social problems, on the one hand, the most significant reason I disagree is that a careful preparation. Before moving abroad, it is such an extremely important time that you guys look for a huge amount of information belonged to your destination namely religion, law, culture, living-style and communication. Therefore, the more knowledge you gain, the easier you acclimate.
On the other hand, there have a variety of potential issues. First and for most, the language barrier prevents you from communicating fluently. Sometimes the residents neither understand clearly what you say nor lead to misunderstanding. Consequently, you find it awfully difficult to explain your ideals and persuade listeners. In addition, providing that the number migrators do not try to raise knowledge, it is so easy to relate to law and become crimes.
Concern practical issues, I totally agree with this opinion because of some elements. To begin with, despite your carefully preparation, you will be affected by the change of weather, time, food and drink leading to your health. For example, suppose that you go to America from Vietnam, vegetables and fishes are replaced by cheese and fast food. Besides, in the winter, the colder and colder the temperature is, the more warm clothes you own. Secondly, the gap in standard puts migrators under lots of pressures causing the stressful mental aspect. Most people moving to other countries have a tendency to want to enjoy a better environment. Therefore, they will try theirs best to make a kind of targets. By contrast, I consider that people have enough time to readjust gradually different conditions while switching to a new place.
In conclusion, living and working abroad cause either social or practical issues. Unless people effort to adapt to a new life, they will be in pain easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16618911175 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84808564809 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616045845272 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2099433858 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.15 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.45 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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