You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
1. describe the training course you want to do
2. explain what the company could do to help me
3. say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to an advertisement for a training course which I saw in the Economic Times. The course is for business executives who want to converse in Mandrian language. To elicudate, it is a 60 days certification course provided by "The lingua" Additionally it focuses on various pivotal aspects of the building a strong foundation for learning the language.
As you are aware that as per the company policy each year an employee is entitled to pursue one such course as a part of a global initiative for employees to achieve their key performance indicators. For such courses, the cost is covered by the company but need prior approval by the reporting manager. Thus I would request to you approve the same.
Since I am handling sales for China, Taiwan, Hong-Kong and Singapore where mostly people converse in Cantonese or Mandarin. The language development course will enable me to easily converse in the local dialect with the customer and close more business transactions for the company.
I look forward to your response and approval on this subject.
Yours sincerely
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to an advertis...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ourse provided by 'The lingua' Additionally it focuses on various pivot...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rior approval by the reporting manager. Thus I would request to you approve the same...
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Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... business transactions for the company. I look forward to your response and appr...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roval on this subject. Yours sincerely John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09189189189 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91222455567 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1742210949 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356756283967 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122032622141 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580768419412 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160880254647 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661460268792 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.