Mass media including the Internet, the television, and newspaper in influences our society and shapes our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
Modern man has raised from bullock cart age to the computer era at a breakneck speed, accompanied by vast improvements in the standards of living. Likewise, mass media like internet , television and newspaper influence on people in different ways good and bad. I will discuss both views and give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, it is right said that change is the law of nature, it is inevitable to keep pace with changing times. Moreover, people can know about all the world and true account of some fields like politics, education, medical. Furthermore, it is good source of earning for that workers, who are related to media and it also give different information to audience about employment, due to which employment rate and economy of country is increased.
On the other hand, some people think, mass media effect on the working system, because few individuals have addicted of television, even students watch lots of television, that effect on their study and health like weak their eyesight and they cannot pay attention towards their education. In addition, students and adults do not participate in outdoor activities, because they keep busy in watching television. Besides this, sometime media show secrets of celebrities and politicians, due to which they have to face some problems.
In conclusion, every coin has two sides, likewise, this topic also has mixed bag. But according to my opinion media should always show right information front of the public, government should make some improvements in the media system, like make strict rules against them, who show false information for increasing television rating point (TRP).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, likewise, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74175098995 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634328358209 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7466489612 50.4703680194 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130977224693 0.242375264174 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455907965057 0.0925447433944 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538029308673 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766065091421 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479680273714 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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