You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Thank your friend for the holiday
• Explain that you left your wallet in their house
• Give them instructions of how to send it back to you
Dear James,
It was the most enjoyable and memorable few days that we spent together at your house and I’m very thankful to you and Beky for hosting me. Actually, I’m blown away from your hospitality and love.
On my way back, in the bus, I realized that I left my purse at your home. It is a black leather purse with my initials engrave inside the back pocket. I kept it in the drawer of bed table before sleeping and in haze forget to pick it up.
As you know that I’m with my parents at our old house for a month, so, please send me that through courier with payment at the delivery option.
Also, I will like both you and Beky to spend Christmas Eve with me and we three will hang out like old days and will also meet our school math’s teacher Mr. Matt.
Looking to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
John.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 692.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37974683544 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.08472981023 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3631467057 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8888888889 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223252002029 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853757662091 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675567714903 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12222332831 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571436722867 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.