All scientific discoveries should be shared among other scientists all over the world. Do you agree or disagree?
Scientific discoveries have always been of paramount importance in breaking the barrier between the known and unknown. Thus there is a raging debate whether all these discoveries should be shared among all the scientists globally. In my view, I agree that all the scientific discoveries should be shared as it enables knowledge sharing and perfecting the flaws if any in that invention. I will elucidate my opinion with relevant examples.
Firstly, there are myriads of advantages in sharing all scientific discoveries within the scientific community globally but the most preponderant one being the critical flow of knowledge which is associated with all inventions. In the recent past, many discoveries were made in the field of medicine for instance inventions of life-saving drugs like Penicillin which then were shared with scientists globally and thus played a pivotal role in savings human lives globally. Similarly, important discoveries like electricity by Thomas Elva Edison and sharing such discoveries globally with scientists only helped to use this discovery for the betterment of human race.
Secondly, critical discoveries in the field of space and sharing knowledge amongst the scientific community only helped humankind to explore the dark side of space. Additionally, it helped the human race to reach other planets which were once thought a strenuous task. In the recent past American scientific agency "NASA" has sent an unmanned mission to Mars and shared those finding globally with the scientific community for possibilities of LIFE on the red planet. The evidence shared has brought in critical contributions from the scientists globally to analyze if Mars could be made habitable and the probability of the evolution of life on the planet.
Lastly based on the above facts and examples I conclude that sharing all discoveries with the scientific community play a pivotal role to gain knowledge and thus have played a critical role in shaping the future of humanity.
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43130990415 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96207316774 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511182108626 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8894517659 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343567574053 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142754865658 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125190732468 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224805474838 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11633606928 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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