In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Obesity has become annoying problem in our mean time. There is more than one member in each family who have gained weight rapidly specially children, which should be considered a serious decease. Many reasons are causing this problem and their solutions are available, which will be discussed in the following lines.
Although young people are considered the healthier sector of society, there are the ones who suffer the most of obesity. This results from several reasons such as wrong eating habits and lack of body exercise. Our modern life routine is affected by technology which makes us lazy. For example, an article which was published in New York Times shows that, 50% of teenagers in North America who are suffering from excess weight are depending in technology for performing their daily life activities such like, ordering fast food through the web and spending their free times in playing video games while sitting at home. Thus, these bad habits should be replace into daily exercises by teaching young people to prepare their own meals and spend spare time in gymnastic activities in order to put out weight and increase body flexibility.
Another important reason of putting on weight for all family members is fast food. This kind of food consumption should be reduced to the minimum rate available. If family members are trained to eat fresh fruits and vegetables instead, this will help their bodies to reduce their fats as well as increasing body fitness.
To conclude, street food should be ignored and technology must not be used instead of human muscles at home for the reason of maintaining our health and fitness. Body exercise will be much help for fat people, if it becomes a life habit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'replaced'?
Suggestion: replaced
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99303135889 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38144070231 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.2297728112 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.230769231 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128836562911 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473427672782 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358566585507 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083586027498 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180743175319 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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