Eating outside or home?
Since the dawn of civilization untill modern times, foods played a vital role in each society. Some people prefer to eat at home , other take radically different point and choose to eat outside. From my vantage point, I think eating at home is more useful option and the line will shed on light my viewpoint.
First reason which deserve some words to say is about its health benefits. The rate of obesity has skyrocketed compared to last decades and many people suffer from unhealthy diet. Cooking plant-based foods at home and eating them makes person's life better. Home foods reduce stress and balance blood sugar and tension. They keep our body in a rail.
Secondly, In approaching this issue, apart from what mentioned above, there is another subtle point. Most of the students have tidy budget and struggle make a living. They have to work at a part-time job. Fast foods are expensive and eating everyday them harms their financial conditions. if you order a pizza it will cost 20 dollar but you can buy food for a week with 20 dollar. Furthermore, you can cook with your friends and make a warm environment.
Finally, taking all aforementioned above into the account, one can conclude that eating at home is good idea for everyone. On the one hand, it cuts your cost, on the other hand you feed better and have good time with your friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ciety. Some people prefer to eat at home , other take radically different point an...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to make'
Suggestion: to make
... students have tidy budget and struggle make a living. They have to work at a part-t...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... them harms their financial conditions. if you order a pizza it will cost 20 dolla...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...s. if you order a pizza it will cost 20 dollar but you can buy food for a week with 20...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...but you can buy food for a week with 20 dollar. Furthermore, you can cook with your fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1977.66487455 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73728813559 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37130050902 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.686440677966 0.524837075471 131% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3216033013 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.875 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213868942675 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670664302853 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946908388111 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137758215603 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776878412854 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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