The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
Recently, the phenomenon of world's issues and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debat. Although contested by many that the significance complicated procedures is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the most pressing problem for the inhabitants earth can be a plus and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a general standpoint, climate change can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in fact that facing a lot of issues, as well as ultimate outcomes, are inextricably boud up. According to my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discoverd globalization. Hence, beneficial ramification of both air pollution and rising temperature apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of a public arena, world's governments efforts might increase the consequences of rising sea level. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by prestigious university has asserted that downsides of creative process is correlated negatively with vital issues. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceive notion of preserving environment.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of doing green activity far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantage of world solutions prove the significance of total outcomes, but also pinpoint thorny issues' potential implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... issues. Thus, it is correct to presume the preconceive notion of preserving environment. To ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6906779661 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26288520341 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716101694915 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0454293768 50.4703680194 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.090909091 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173894879128 0.242375264174 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495533005171 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485409566119 0.071462118173 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837950266788 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174158342602 0.0609392437508 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.1 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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