The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is to see an upsurge in a number of problems all over. In my opinion, pollution is the biggest of all. In this essay, I will elaborate on this problem and recommend some suggestions to overcome this soaring concern.

There are a number of consequences of pollution in the world. The most conspicuous one is that pollution from industries and other sources contribute to deteriorating the environment. Not only do they have an adverse impact on ecology, but they also cause people to suffer from a range of diseases. Needless to all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on flora and fauna.

Steps to deal with this problem are many, but the most effective ones are in fact not remote and complicated, but accessible and practicable. Primarily, the government should introduce stringent law and regulations to ensure that factories and manufacturers use eco-friendly measures in producing goods. Besides, international organizations can raise funds and thus help underprivileged nations to fight off pollution in every sphere. Last but not least, an awareness program to educate people about the harmful efforts of pollution can also be initiated.

To conclude, dealing with pollution is one of the most prevalent/widespread problems that faces almost all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, these concrete steps as discussed above can effectively strengthen the fight against and alleviate/improve this growing concern. Its potential impact is indeed too dire to ignore.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...far-reaching impact on flora and fauna. Steps to deal with this problem are many...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, nevertheless, so, then, thus, in fact, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36776859504 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2649884502 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.582126444 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7857142857 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107828275742 0.242375264174 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364525531875 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396687726324 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666192986369 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119011638696 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.