Internet is the source from where we can get information in the world. Whether to use internet in a useful way or to create problems for future totally depends from person to person. The statement that “some people think that internet provides us with valuable information “rings true to me. Although some people think that internet might create problems but these days we can access anything on the internet. I would like to explain my points in the following essay by giving some reasons.
First of all, the internet is the major source which can be accessed easily. From the information on a first grade student’s classwork to a businessman handling big companies, anything can be easily searched on the internet. No matter, internet also has many demerits in it due to which it might lead to the certain unwanted circumstances, but it is very beneficial. It is one of the best and the easiest way to search any subject, topic, information about anything going around the world. We can access to what is going around the world with just one click. The amount of convenience in having internet has made people’s life so easy. For example, my father saves a lot of his time by just searching on internet about his work and also about the news and other stuff. This saves a lot of his time and the most important we try to save paper by not using the newspaper and instead reading the same information on the internet.
Secondly, I would say that internet has made a major impact for keeping people connected to each other. Through the various social media, we can communicate with each other so easily that we need not wait for phone call or anything. The video calls have made our lives so much better that we can text and talk to each other via video calls which no one would have dreamt about. In early times due to non-accessibility of phones and internet people could not talk to each other and barely knew what was going around in the world but now they can so easily contact each other. From my personal experience I can share that my grandmother is very old and she cannot walk and her kids stay abroad, she always wanted to meet them but could not go, now due to ease of internet she talks to her kids on phone and is also able to do the video calls which brings a smile to her face.
Lastly, I would like to say that internet is useful for us as we can store all our data online. There are a lot of software and other things which made our lives so easy that there is no need of all written records but the data is stored online. No matter there are many harmful effects of internet too but the amount of ease and comfort the internet gives is praised by every second person.
I would like to conclude with this that everything has its merits and demerits, but if we try not to do wrong things and always go on a positive path it will definitely be useful to us and to other with a lot less problems in our daily lives. Internet is one of the very useful sources of information, communication, data and many other things if used in a positive way.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use specific reasons and examples to 67
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- TOEFL ESSAY: Do young people enjoy life more than older people? 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 352, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ion, data and many other things if used in a positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36798336798 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41771942059 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451143451143 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6995910617 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.722222222 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7222222222 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315242019335 0.236089414692 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112444086207 0.076458572812 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570835737772 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201495620876 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439290369476 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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