some people think that government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the internet to help them find jobs.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, we live in that era every single people have educated they know, how to survive. Several humans think that government should give unemployed people to free cellphone and internet to got jobs. I completely disagree with this statement. I will explain about this topic in further essay.
Firstly, most of the student select study topic by their intrest moreover, they know about that stream. That is why they got easily jobs However, several people getting problem. They takes a help of the vacancy and get employment. In example, unemployed people achieve job easily by the communication with the other people through mobile phone and use of the internet. That is why I totally disagree with this statement.
Secondaly, several people misuse of this offer from government. They can take free mobile phone nd free connection to the internet from them. Nowadays, so many humans use social media moreover, they share data regarding time pass where else not for useful. For example, there are so many webside available for social media and gain knowledge but most of the people use for only entertainmrnt only. Therefor I am not agree with this topic.
On the pther hand, only some people use mobile phone and internet for get employment by use of some websites which are yputube.com, Wikipedia.com, etcetera.
To put it in a nutshell, I completely disagree with this statement government should not be provide unemployed people to free cellphone and free access to internet for find jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stream. That is why they got easily jobs However, several people getting problem....
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...r, several people getting problem. They takes a help of the vacancy and get employmen...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...y entertainmrnt only. Therefor I am not agree with this topic. On the pther hand, ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, moreover, regarding, second, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10931174089 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60229738486 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542510121457 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1878240728 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.875 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40441624063 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135863724942 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117313160273 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250727094795 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108256531762 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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