Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, distance between each individual is shortened comprehensively by advanced technology. It makes people intend to consult others before determining some critical issues. But someone argues that people are more independent than before. Both side are reasonable and need to be discussed in more detail.
In modern world, delivering information is quicker than the past owing to communication software. Despite they shorten gap between every single person, they cause people more dependent. People intend to search knowledge from the internet when they meet something difficult. As time goes by, they will lose ability of thinking independently and receive information without judging them whether true or not. In addition, more people rely on the comfortable lives, which progressive technology constructed. Take an official report for an example, if people lose cell phones. They seems to miss in forests. As a result, progressive devices and setups make people more reliant.
On the other hand, people are isolated due to busy works and lives. Compare with the present, people usually communicate with their neighbors and have dinners together. But now, these situations happen more rarely because of fast-paced lives. Even if people have lived nearby other for a decade, they may not recognize each other when they meet on street. Hence, these fast-pace lifestyles make human more isolated and independent. Nowadays, people intend to cope with troubles by themselves.
From my point of view, each people have different lifestyles as everyone’s characteristic is not identical at all. Therefore, both situations on above comments are reasonable; whether dependent or independent is attributed to everyone’s quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...more independent than before. Both side are reasonable and need to be discussed in ...
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Line 2, column 577, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...ample, if people lose cell phones. They seems to miss in forests. As a result, progre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66283524904 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96899021443 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651340996169 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2694974228 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.9 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.05 20.7667163134 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352509647994 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936466620039 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494973515655 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198091374938 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050648622959 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.66 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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