Debris
The listening lecture totally opposes to the reading passage in the topic of how to protect airspace from hitting the debris. First of all, the reading says that scientist can try to track the orbit of debris to protect the safety of spaceship. Likewise, the listening argues that this solution is not likely to work. Scientist can only track bigger objects, but many of the debris are small and they can still cause critical damages. In other words, tracking the debris' orbit cannot not prevent spaceships from colliding with smaller particles.
In addition, the reading indicates that by constructing a shield outside the spaceship with a unique metal can spaceships be protected in the collision. However, the listening implies that this is not likely to work. People had try to produce the shield and install it on the spaceship, but these metals are way too heavy. People need to invent a more powerful rocket to take this spaceship to space. Therefore, it is unlikely that this idea will be effective.
Lastly, the reading asserts that using the laser broom to sweep out the debris in the way will be helpful. Nevertheless, the listening is not convinced by this method. Laser broom might be a useful way to clean out the debris, but it can also be use as a weapon in the military. As a result, it will be too controversial for people to use this method.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
... this is not likely to work. People had try to produce the shield and install it on...
^^^
Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
... this is not likely to work. People had try to produce the shield and install it on...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, lastly, likewise, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, in addition, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1373.03311258 82% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76793248945 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5443352854 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514767932489 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 419.366225166 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.6469173836 49.2860985944 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7142857143 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06452816374 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149152192258 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055622293782 0.0996497079465 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881532695718 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102041315151 0.162205337803 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093987118424 0.0443174109184 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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