The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
These two maps give geological information about Islip town. First map indicates present Islip and second map is blueprint for development. Except few buildings, everything will be changed.
At now, Islip has straight main road which has shop street at besides. Also there are two side roads from main road each one connected with a school and a park. Between the school and the park, housings are located.
There would be many changing in Islip town because big development is planned. In my opinion, the biggest change is road. A dual carriageway will built around the town and road for pedestrian will be located in center of the town instead of main road. The shop streets will be merged by one, however I think the place to shopping will more than before, because new shopping centre will established. Otherwise shrink of the park is planned, the school will be expanded.
I predict Islip people can move to another cities more easily because a new bus station and car park is planned. In addition, for establishment of new housing, more people can live in Islip.
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- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... road which has shop street at besides. Also there are two side roads from main road...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...change is road. A dual carriageway will built around the town and road for pedestrian...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'establish'
Suggestion: establish
...efore, because new shopping centre will established. Otherwise shrink of the park is plann...
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Line 5, column 402, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... new shopping centre will established. Otherwise shrink of the park is planned, the scho...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e can move to another cities more easily because a new bus station and car park i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, second, so, i think, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85869565217 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49581407595 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9113087399 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172720045783 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662667626309 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759210181086 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112126719277 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776385510573 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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