some people say that holding sport competitions causes many troubles. Others disagree.
Discuss both views.
There is no doubt that sports play a vital role in our lives. Some individuals believe that various sport competitions held may cause certain concerns, while others opine that such events are essential. This essay shall discuss both views with examples.
On the one hand, organising sporting events such as Olympics, may involve a huge investment, as the infrastructure of the city, where such events are being held may need to be appropriate for the participants and audience. This is because, many athletics across the globe participate in such renowned events. As a result, to give such them an experience worth-while, investment is likely to be required. To cite an example, the Indian Government had spent around 10 crore for conducting the Olympics in New Delhi, which is the capital of India. In short, sport events conducted may involve huge budgets from the government's.
On the other hand, many would support the fact that sports competitions play an essential role in bring nations together. This is because, participation happens among different demographics of the society. To illustrate, IPL cricket matches, consist of players from different parts of the world, though having one aim of wining the match as a team. As a consequence, all differences are set a side and great bonds are formed. In other words, sport competitions help develop bonds among nations.
To conclude, many believe that, sport competitions may involve a large amount of money, for maintaining infrastructure. However, others support the fact that such events bring countries together to create bonds of friendship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'crore' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'crores'.
Suggestion: crores
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, in short, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28015564202 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91841763655 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2731856172 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18399245145 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630399888865 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653283802351 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127714066436 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669003966302 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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