Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
Children, like adults, of late, have become heavily reliant on computers. While some psychologists claim that it is beneficial to expose children to computer devices, others stress on the fact that such practices harms children mentally and isolates them from the society. This essay discusses some of the considerable benefits and worrying drawbacks related to this trend.
To begin with, kids, of this generation, would love to spend a prodigious amount of time on desktops be it for education or gaming purpose. Parents, however, are worried that this increased inclination towards those machines can be extremely detrimental to the mental health as well as promoting isolation to youngsters. This is because, the dependence on these devices is built up frighteningly easy and this eventually paves way for complete addiction to these devices. Furthermore, increased exposure to those machines subject children to the radiation emitted from them which compromises the health of teenagers. The well renowned blue whale game, played on the internet, for instance, has claimed lives of many youngsters which persuades the young players to lose their lives as an accomplishment of the game. Nevertheless, the game was banned by governments to prevent further fatalities.
On the contrary, although there have been evidences of computers inculcating seclusion, these are so statistically rare as to be negligible. The overwhelming majority of pupils reap plethora of benefits by constantly accessing computers. In this contemprary world, it is imminent to be more than a computer literate for a foreseeable future and for better job prospects. As the Information Technology sector is booming and is not set to be outdated, schools can prioritize computer classes even more. Google employees, for example, when interviewed, professed that they were able to land this job with ease owing to the reason that they studied computing languages such as Java during their teenage period.
To conclude, even though there are cons associated with subjecting children to computers include long term isolation and causing health complications, significant pros such as ease of landing a job early and preventing them from being outdated continue to exist. Gauging both, I strongly advocate the view that children must regularly use computers to reap enormous benefit, despite some health hazards that parents and teachers should be wary of when kids use these digital devices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47120418848 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94723012355 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9428772788 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204596703999 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585580460233 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047524971349 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1240963861 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368167734647 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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