Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
Many people think that region affects the success of person. If a person born and brought up in America be more successful and a person born and brought up in India be less successful. It is wrong that region influence the success of a person. We will see the following details in the next paragraph.
To begin with, I think, The region not affect the success of the person. I have many examples where a person belongs to the urban region and become more successful. I can count many people for developing countries are way more successful from the person of developed country. Everyone knows about Google company chief executive officer Sunder Pichai. He is from India and now he is earning a millions dollars. Hence I don’t think region effect on successful person.
To the other hand, Many people think that the region has contribute to success. I think those guys want show the superiority of a person. I strongly disagree this. If a person has caliber than no one can stop him to achieve the success and region nothing want to do it.
To sum up, as aforementioned, I want to reiterate that the region cannot be a factor of a successful person. I strongly believe that success come in depend on people those who work for it day and night. Region has not relation on success of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63362068966 5.00649968141 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56699400744 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 139.433497537 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.6157635468 217% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.576806102 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.2352941176 104.977214359 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 20.9669160288 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 7.25397266985 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45417418569 0.242375264174 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193258409198 0.0925447433944 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168138796012 0.071462118173 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306237528379 0.151781067708 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349434584981 0.0609392437508 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 12.6369458128 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.1260098522 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.9458128079 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.32886699507 85% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 55.0591133005 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.5123152709 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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