Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?Give reasons for your answer and includ

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Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit, Wisdom is not putting it into fruit salad.

When science says human is born from sea and still we, as human are not making any efforts to keep pollution away from our origin then its very disappointing factor.
Human body is 70% made from water. Where as rivers and lakes are major water source for human survival.

There is no conjecture that biggest cause for pollution is an Industrial development. India is developing country and our industrial sector still needs room to detox chemical in water and prime source to release the polluted chemicals is sea.

Then while importing oil from Saudi Arabian countries, our ship leaks it in water, which kills thousands of fish and sea creatures. In fact while I was in the Maldives I saw one ship was leaking oil in the sea which was very old and hardly ever repaired or maintained. Human ignorance has a price and we all have to pay it in the future.

Giving back is essential and integral part on this earth, but human only knows one language i.e. language of spending without keeping accounts of profit.

On the contrary, Indian Government has started cleaning Indian rivers and this programme is called as “ Rally for Rivers” This particular program has received lots of praise from not only Indian people but also all the developed countries around the world. United nations has also offered significant amount to this noble cause.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: NON_ACTION_CONTINUOUS[3]
Message: The verb know is usually not used with a continuous form, use the simple form instead. Suggestion: 'knows'
Suggestion: knows
Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit, Wisdom is not...
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Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
Knowledge is knowing that a tomato is a fruit, Wisdom is not...
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Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...r. Human body is 70% made from water. Where as rivers and lakes are major water source...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng without keeping accounts of profit. On the contrary, Indian Government has s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, while, in fact, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45790523148 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633064516129 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1851310541 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182619269779 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688218255151 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527823567543 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812023560625 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559023501926 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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