Write about the following topic:
There is evidence that inhalting cigarette smoke causes health problems not only for smokers but for
non-smokers who inhale other people’s smoke. In view of this, smoking should be banned in all
public places, even though this would restrict somepeople’s freedom of action.
What are your views?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, there is a popular discussion topic about breathing cigarette smoke claimed that harmful for both active and passive smokers. So the main question is smoking should be prohibited in whole common areas whether everyone’s liberty or not . I firmly believe that this view is correct.
First of all, smoking is the mother of numerous diseases.I have got some friends affected especially from lung cancer, some heart diseases and diabetic sickness. What I mean is this situation confirmed by high budget researches. For instance scientist observed that %75 percent of cancer patients who are suffered by lung cancer, high tension and hearth stroke were active smokers. Moreover,% 50 of passive smokers were affected from active smokers smoking exhale. In short, it is crystal clear that cigarette have not been friend of human beings , caused deadly cancers despite the fact that they are non-smokers.
Another things is, beside health problems smoking have caused some economical issues. For example, I have some familiars that their smoking habit take a part to spend them high money. It is too expensive for both when smoking or shortly afterward treatment costs. Furthermore, for treatment of smoking effects government spares high budget , need to find enough human source and produce high-priced medicines . Of course some people may think that although smoking is poisonous,unhealthy and dangerous to people around them should not be fully prohibited because of human rights . I can see them point. However, I disagree with it.
In the light of the information given above, I can confidently say that smoking should be strictly prohibited in whole common public areas to everybody. If not our future would be unsafe. Government should educate people's about risks and open rehabilitation centers to rescue active and passive smokers .
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...ers to rescue active and passive smokers .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, another thing, as to, for example, for instance, i mean, in short, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75857782989 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9586048356 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314534710539 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898740653934 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560351094855 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191074500475 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395853714482 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.