People should take part in sports either in individual or in teams, because people can learn many useful skills. How far do you agree? Explain and use examples or your own experience.
The importance of sports, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of participating in sports has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on our studying, learning, and exercising in recent years. It can be agreed that there are lots of advantages of taking part in team to participate sports, but others argue that people should join the sport individually. This essay will elaborate on both the positive and negative impacts of these issues and will lead to a logical conclusion. At the outset, there are numerous ways to explain why participating sports team have plenty of advantages, but the most conspicuous one is rooted in the fact that athletes could learn team work skills and develop their corporation abilities, which helps to improve their communication competences and to promote the team work spirit. Thus, it is apparent that taking part in team sports has quite a few strengths. Nevertheless, opponents of this trend tend to believe that in some cases individual sportsman could learn more competitive skills when he faces the difficulties alone, which means this competitive ability might increase people's problem solving competence and better physical strength. For instance, according to new research from Harvard University, 60% of athletes choose to face the trouble issues independently because they think they can solve the problem effectively by their strong body. Therefore, it is obviously true that individual sport also has some positive aspects to develop useful skills. In view of arguments outlined above, one can be concluded that team sport is prominent, although individual sport has a number of advantages that be well handled by the professional team and sports organization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 739, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to team'
Suggestion: to team
...d in the fact that athletes could learn team work skills and develop their corporati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95177005008 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4974842369 50.4703680194 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 104.977214359 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.12807881773 24% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186437735565 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734681453704 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067151661571 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186437735565 0.151781067708 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0609392437508 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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