The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life
Nowadays it is very common for people to have career in multiple stream. As the world demands the flexibility and wide experience from people, it has become imperative to have multiple stream knowledge and career options. In this essay we will discuss why most of the people pursue multiple course and how it has impact on their overall development of their skills and their life style.
First of all it is worth considering that there is huge competition in the market, which forces us to level up the pace with the ongoing trend. For instance with the changing technology, every software engineer has to update oneself with latest versions and techniques. In order to carry out same one has to attending several seminars or courses. This helps to achieve the goal by fulfilling market need. It helps to balance the phenomenon of an ongoing developments in the today's world. In addition , many companies consider promotion of an employee based on their updated knowledge and certifications obtained as per the latest trend.
Further to that, there are several streams which are loosing identity and at the same time several jobs are gaining high importance and recognition in this current world. In the early 20th century all banking transaction were carried out manually using books and ledgers, however now everything is computerized. The one who adopted to the latest technology and computers, they were able to survive and the others led to witnessing crisis.
Taking everything into consideration it is truly right to have a multiple carriers to cope up with the changing trend. Ultimately leads to have a financial and economical stability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...software engineer has to update oneself with latest versions and techniques. In order to ca...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'development'?
Suggestion: development
...to balance the phenomenon of an ongoing developments in the todays world. In addition , many...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...opments in the todays world. In addition , many companies consider promotion of an...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ns obtained as per the latest trend. Further to that, there are several streams whic...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...test technology and computers, they were able to survive and the others led to wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the others led to witnessing crisis. Taking everything into consideration it ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'carrier'?
Suggestion: carrier
...on it is truly right to have a multiple carriers to cope up with the changing trend. Ult...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ltimately leads to have a financial and economical stability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11808118081 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74423103211 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608856088561 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6671783723 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134387187308 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434484266109 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401609990019 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758817062054 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417252551367 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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