Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.
Trips and expeditions are always fruitful as these are reliable and true sources of nature's creations such as vast flora and fauna nourished by almighty without human efforts. Visits to the mysterious, bizarre and uncanny places are tremendously increasing due to the curiosity amongst people in relation to nature as they watch it through the internet. My dissertation would summarize the pros and cons for the visitors exploring such regions.
To embark on, going to the locations with arduous weather conditions and untrodden spots are really worthwhile for the geographers and archaeologists as it works as an icing on the cake in their research. Mundane people can also gain benefits by nabbing an opportunity to have a glance at nature's infinite beauty. To elaborate, one can develop and interest to be a future researcher by looking at huge mountains and coming across fossils that they have never seen before. So, the advantages are un terminable.
However, exploring unfavorable and inexpedient destinations also results in unusual disturbance and could be exasperating for the species sustaining there. human activities like smoking nad diving an cause interruption to their normal life. moreover, it could be scary and bone chilling to come across dense forests and colossal mountains and it could be nerve racking for the soft hearted people. Consequently, such trips could be life threatening too.
To conclude, uncanny location travelling could be detrimental also and can leads us to most astonishing and stunning sceneries of the world. it is the matter of a one's perception towards the endless seductiveness of the earth and lethal animal kingdom that can bring exuberant joy or destructiveness respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02109930023 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7075470798 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878033785845 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298040648605 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306289319425 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486057586957 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042785292808 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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