People should take part in sports either in individual or in teams, because people can learn many useful skills. How far do you agree? Explain and use examples or your own experience.
Nowadays, it is impossible to deny the fact that sports help people improve physical strength, reduce stress, develop healthy relationship, and build important character values. Although many believe that sports are not entirely beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a number of individuals. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that it is important for people to take part in sports either in individual or in teams, and I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, sport is a way to get fit, to get healthier and to reduce stress. Regular physical activity contributes to lower body mass Indexes, muscles and better heart and lung function. Adults who exercise daily are 65% less likely to get sick or suffer from mental health problems according to a research conducted by Department of health and Human Services. playing sports generate hormones that keep depression and stress at bay. Hence, exercise reduces the level of stress and improve physical status.
Furthermore, team sport competitions and training help develop healthy relationship and build important character values, including self-respect, confidence and leaderships. Socializing during those activities provide opportunities for children to develop friendships and learn teamwork, communication and leadership skills. For instance, students attending sport activities on weekly basis are found to have better opportunity after graduating and less likely to smoke or drink. Therefore, team sports contribute useful skills and healthy relationships.
In conclusion, there are numberless benefits of taking parts in either individual or team sports. Parents should encourage children to play sports and build up a good habit while they still young. Government shall create related policies and build sports facilities and playgrounds to help citizens be happy and healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Playing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 8.36945812808 287% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1207.87684729 134% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66783216783 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95949847591 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.997777716 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168682859336 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543886599043 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572848855483 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986670651498 0.151781067708 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057284640446 0.0609392437508 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 11.5310837438 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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