Some believe that parents and their children should have fun during this time. While, some believe that they should talk about school work.
Which of the following do you believe. State reasons and examples for you choice.
Current inflation in economy demands adults to work and earn their and their family’s bread. Consequently, there is only limited time for parents to spend with their children. Now, the question arises, What to do during this time? There are two schools of thought for this. Some believe that parents and their children should have fun during this time. While, some believe that they should talk about school work. I belong to the first one. The following are the reasons for my choice.
Firstly, the child is not relying on his parents for doing his school work. This develops a sense of responsibility in the child. The child develops a habit of dealing with his work problems himself, which is an important trait. This way, he will be habituated to dealing with his problems. This development is beneficial for him in his professional life. For example, my father has always encouraged me to do my school work myself, this has helped me in becoming more responsible person than I ever was.
Secondly, a child receives love and tenderness from his parents, this will help the child in becoming a benevolent person. Parents and their kids spend this time having fun. Thus, parents can show more love and affection towards their kid. Contrarily, this is not possible when they are helping with the kid’s homework. For example, usually in rural areas, people believe that education is the first priority. Hence, they urge their kids to study as much as possible. This helps the kids in becoming successful. However, the kids do not have the required love for their parents.
All in all, enjoying the limited time parents and their kids have with each other advocates a loving relationship between them. Also, makes the child more responsible.
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- Some believe that parents and their children should have fun during this time. While, some believe that they should talk about school work.Which of the following do you believe. State reasons and examples for you choice. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ldren should have fun during this time. While, some believe that they should talk abo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51123531087 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545762711864 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3806436659 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.0416666667 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2916666667 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379171328295 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120873341169 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137689264545 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233080386208 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198235513796 0.0645574589148 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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