More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Personal Vehicles are dominating the society, people are liking to have own cars for the travelling purpose irrespective of social transport. Comfort zone, independent and convenient is the logic behind this fashion. Encouraging the public to utilize more and more public buses by improving the qualities, upgrading and raising the tax on fuel and motor vehicles.
Facilities attend by the person like the ease in travelling around the city, without time boundation and more importantly drive you from the starting point to the destination, according to the personal needs. All these prerequisites make them use own travelling vehicle. On the other hand, the government can boost the public to make optimum use of public transport by promoting awareness of the rise in pollution from personal cars which led to a detrimental effect on the environment.
In addition to that, an increase in duty on the buying of a motor vehicle and restricting families to have only 1 in the house. Although, increasing public transport in the community, lowering ticket money and offering monthly bus pass to regular commuters are also support the authorities to encourage individuals. For an illustration, improving the quality of services such as incorporation of air conditioners in the buses in hot zone areas and free services during rush hours favours the efficient consumption by passengers.
In conclusion, people often grab their own vehicles for the distance to covered from one place to another, helps them to remain an independent and easy way to reach destinations. Supreme authorities can uplift the public means of commuter and minimize the prices of routes and keep the locals aware of the hazards caused by these automobiles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...cles are dominating the society, people are liking to have own cars for the travelling pur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28623188406 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98591834443 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2073387017 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251121372309 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832377420549 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622815211136 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145685046364 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652405926633 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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