Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace ( eg at home, when travelling, etc... )
Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadiantage
Instead of long business trips, nowadays online conferences are becoming poplular. It is not only convenient and for businessman and flexible for schedule, but also easy to barter infomations in leaps and bourds. In addition, this is particularly hefphel for busy parents, exoecially, mother. It can reduce stress level and help them to manage their daily activities better
Despite the advantages risentioned above a related criticisrn is that it leads to unhealthy lifestyle. No one deny that it is wonderful to be able to work from home, but a person who spends much time on their computer may find that health suffers in the long run. Besides, we all have instant access to entertainment and special connections are just a click. It also means that personal information could be stolen by easy way, noticeablef, bussiness information. There fore, information technology can damages to some companis by harmful ways when they lost their datas
On the whole, most people profit from the use of mobile technolog, and there are obvious adiantags to its use. However, we need to keep an eye on how much we relyon this resource, other wise the diaschanfages will be greater for everyone
- Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace eg at home when travelling etc Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadiantage 62
- Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace ( eg at home, when travelling, etc... ) Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadiantage 84
- Some educationalist argue that non exam, arts based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They belive that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance. To what extent 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: Therefore
...ay, noticeablef, bussiness information. There fore, information technology can damages to ...
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Line 2, column 505, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'damage'
Suggestion: damage
... There fore, information technology can damages to some companis by harmful ways when t...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: OTHER_WISE_OTHERWISE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'otherwise'?
Suggestion: otherwise
...ye on how much we relyon this resource, other wise the diaschanfages will be greater for e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, in addition, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06632653061 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83090632347 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6227147238 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137768333343 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432882758356 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520994680666 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795835280592 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341452216151 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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