Unfortunately , in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind the image.
Creating an appealing image in this contemporary world has become the most important thing as compared to the real image and truth behind that image. Here, int his statement the author is showing contempt for the contemporary world because, it bolster the fact that creating an virtual image is more important thing than following that image in real life.I accede with the conclusion of the author because it is true regarding the modern society.
First of all, due to increase use of internet in daily life people are following virtual image of people that they show on newly emerging social media platforms. The gradation in the use of social media platform has also instigated various people in the world to build an image of themselves on the internet. However, teenagers are the main portion of the society which are influenced by this new images.However, one cannot blindly follow the images that are growing on internet without knowing the reality behind that internet profile. For instance, if anyone is showing his altruist nature on internet via posting videos or images on social media platform, then one cannot simply claim that the person is in real life altruist too. Many people have been using such kind of videos for gaining money via internet.
However, people are also not inclined to follow such public figures on internet but they even follow them in real life too. For example, a political leader can hide his/her true identity behind the image they have created among people of that particular state or country.However, there has been constant news regarding the scandals and various actions that has been by that public figure who is followed by many people. So, following blindly some one in the real life is not a good thing to do because such figure can hide there identity behind a benign figure and can mislead the society in many harmful ways.
One always have to be skeptical while following such image or figure. Also, by doing this one can eschew the misleading path that any malaise figure can guide us and hence save oneself from the harm that can be done to us.Moreover, any government or society cannot avoid such figures from creating such images because following such figures is an free choice of the people of the society. However, to avoid such things to happen government or society can conduct various programs which help the society from being misguided by the the misleading image or figure.
In sum, it is not always true that the image formed is fallacious but one cannot simply know about the true reality behind the image. Hence according to me, being skeptical is the best way to shun helping bad things to happen in this contemporary world where, creating an image is more important than reality in the figure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2306.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89596602972 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40817310325 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.426751592357 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 742.5 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.6640366497 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.733333333 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264387530473 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106260896264 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130195831498 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190960507822 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161677808292 0.0667264976115 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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