Pollution of the air, water and soil and depletion of natural resources are two of the most pressing problems facing the world today.
What has caused them and what are some possible solutions?
The rise of demand for food has had an impact on the use of chemical pesticides. Someone says that this is not the ultimate root of the problem. Also, they say that overpopulation is the main culprit. But this argument would be missing out of important steps. The increase of people didn’t lead in itself to the pollution of the air, water and soil. Intriguingly, what caused the problem in the first place was a move away from classical farming methods. In the past, our ancestors used to farm in a natural way. But, nowadays the pesticides have been used in farming to make lots of crops by company or individual. Because it is a way to increase more profit. There are some viable solution is Organic farming and a respect for nature’s cycles. I think this solution would certainly help to solve the problem.
In addition to, Depletion of natural resources is another problem which we have to solve. these are not only fossil fuels such as oil, coal and gas, but things we all often take for granted, like fresh water and essential trace minerals in good quality soil. Even though we already knew that there are only finite supplies of traditional energy sources, we acted like we didn't. To prevent a lack of natural supplies, we have to invest in new, less polluting technologies in our vehicles. Moreover, using more hydrogen technology which is available for car crossing road. these solutions would be helpful
In conclusion, pollution of the air, water and soil and depletion of natural resources are caused by our greed. If we behave like before, it will ultimately lead to world being endanger. However possible solutions which is mentioned above could be to utilise to avoid those problems.
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- Pollution of the air, water and soil and depletion of natural resources are two of the most pressing problems facing the world today.What has caused them and what are some possible solutions? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 501, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a natural way" with adverb for "natural"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...In the past, our ancestors used to farm in a natural way. But, nowadays the pesticides have been...
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Line 1, column 622, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lots of crops by company or individual. Because it is a way to increase more profit. Th...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...another problem which we have to solve. these are not only fossil fuels such as oil, ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...tional energy sources, we acted like we didnt. To prevent a lack of natural supplies,...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ich is available for car crossing road. these solutions would be helpful In conclusi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be to utilise to avoid those problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60605710226 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7005914567 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7894736842 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239523187111 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650100003592 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776478265257 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167829582329 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609905342141 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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