You are moving to a new country ,write a letter to the accommodation agency to rent a house
In your letter describe
Yourself and your family
Which area you would like to live in
And what facilities you need in the house.
Hi concerned ,
My name is Amin and I am an Indian citizen who will be shortly moving to Canada with my family as permanent resident. My family includes my spouse who is a financial consultant and my two years old daughter.
As my primary place of working will be Mississauga,Toronto ,I am looking for a studio apartment near wood wagon street,as a first preference.This will help me in travelling for my work in least time and my daughter will be immensely benefitted with the choice of schools around .My next preference would be any independent house in proximity to the city center where I will be moving access to the local market.
As far as amenities related other than basic need of fully furnished apartment,the house should have a digital security system in place as me and my spouse will be working most of the day .In addition to this ,it will be grateful if you give us steel utensils for kitchen and a toy room with wooden cabinets for my daughter
Looking forward to your response .
Your Faithfully
Amit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Hi concerned , My name is Amin and I am an Indian cit...
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Suggestion: , Toronto
...ary place of working will be Mississauga,Toronto ,I am looking for a studio apartment ne...
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... of working will be Mississauga,Toronto ,I am looking for a studio apartment near ...
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Suggestion: , as
... studio apartment near wood wagon street,as a first preference.This will help me in...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...wood wagon street,as a first preference.This will help me in travelling for my work ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s will help me in travelling for my work in least time and my daughter will be im...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the least'.
Suggestion: in the least
...will help me in travelling for my work in least time and my daughter will be immensely ...
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Suggestion: .
...fitted with the choice of schools around .My next preference would be any independ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...tted with the choice of schools around .My next preference would be any independen...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cal market. As far as amenities related other than basic need of fully furnished...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... basic need of fully furnished apartment,the house should have a digital security sy...
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Suggestion: .
...y spouse will be working most of the day .In addition to this ,it will be grateful...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...spouse will be working most of the day .In addition to this ,it will be grateful i...
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Line 4, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing most of the day .In addition to this ,it will be grateful if you give us steel...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ughter Looking forward to your response . Your Faithfully Amit
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Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to your response . Your Faithfully Amit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87125109321 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.263929679 44.8134815571 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 169.0 76.5299724578 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.0 16.8248392259 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0550943292629 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439241232936 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411242971116 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428067187136 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320958081695 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 7.45979381443 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.