Dear Manager,
My name is Joseph Allen and I would be moving to Canada on my job in the coming month. I am writing to you to help me rent a decent home for our entire stay in Canada. So, here are more details about my family and our specifications to rent a home.
I am a sales manager and my office is located in Matheson Blvd, Mississauga. We are a family of three people: my wife, my two-year-old daughter. We are looking for a home which is not only in close proximity to my office that makes my commute easy but also has grocery stores and shopping mall in the vicinity as this helps at the beginning of our stay until we settle in and buy a car. My wife would plan to work once we move in and settle a bit around with the new place, and therefore it would be convenient to have any go stations nearby.
Furthermore, we would like to move into a semi-furnished double bedroom house with at least 2 bathrooms and it should have certain minimum amenities like in-house washer and dryer, a dishwasher with the 24-hour water supply of hot and cold water. Hope you could find a rented house with the above-mentioned requirements before we land in Canada.
Looking forward to hearing from you with the news about rent house availability.
Your's Sincerely,
Joseph
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are a family of three people: my wife, my two-year-old daughter. We are lookin...
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Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...looking for a home which is not only in close proximity to my office that makes my commute easy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50643776824 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64142780656 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9158448631 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133560989126 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599779359969 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477938227106 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877958924808 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333788200331 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.