Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this era, needs of people in the world become increasing while then number of populations in the world is growing. More population in the world influences the price of primer needs which become increasing. So, people in the world need a good job to fulfill their necessity. Several people think that a good future career can be got from studying at university. While other people agree with this statement, some opinions say it is straight to get job.
Some people believe that searching jobs straight after graduation from senior high school is interesting choice. They choose it because they want money for their life or they are lazy to continue study at university. If they get a job straight after finishing studying, they will have more experience. So, they will get the best job. For example, people who are working during twenty years will get more experience than people who are working for one-until-two days. Beside of getting more experience, they will get much money from their own salaries. Thus, this makes it clear why a job will give safe for their life.
The other people believe that education is very important for the best career. So, they continue to study at university. Firstly, by studying at university, they will get knowledge which can give effects to increase a company. As a result, the company becomes good development. Secondly, after they finished studying at college, they have engineering degrees which can be used in applying for a company. With engineering degrees, they can get high position. For example, if they work in the company, they usually can get high position which is better than others. Young people who do not continue to study at university or college will do not get it.
In conclusion, there are many ways for getting the best job. It is the people can work straight after school or the people can continue to study at university.
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