Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important?
Success which is a dream from everybody in the world is a choice. Nobody in the world wants to get failure in their life. For finding a success, they must have a destination in their life. If they want get good success, they must use their talent or hard work for getting it. Ability of somebody for getting to success is different. Many people think that the key to success can get from hard work while several people think that good success can get from a talent which has in their body.
Firstly, some people believe that hard work can give a success. People who is diligent for getting good result will work with not to yield an inch for doing something. For example, Thomas Alfa Edison is one of others who have characteristic hard worker. He always tries his experiment as many as in thousands time to find blazing lamp, but always fails to do experiment. As a result, because he is always hard work, he can get success for finding blazing lamp which is used by people in the world now. Besides, of getting good result, they will get success and good job. From this, it becomes quite evident that hard work can get good result.
Secondly, other people believe that a talent of people self will give a success for getting good future. If they have a talent in their self, they will be easy to absorb information. For example, when the teacher gives lessons to people who do not have dance talent will be difficult for accepting the subject from their teacher. But they who have dance talent will be easy to absorb information from lessons, so they become a dancer artist which is success. As well as, talent of themselves, they will have different creativity. With their creativity, they will get much money. Thus, this makes it admittedly why a talent will give different ability in themselves for getting a success.
Ultimately, the key to get a success in this life is two ways. It is the people can get a success in their life with hard work or the people can get a success with a talent.
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