do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
world news are an integral part of our lives.sometimes it seems not to have any direct impact on our lives but sometimes it influences different aspect of our lives in some way. In my opinion, we should know about events happening around the world because it not only helps to develop a deeper understanding about world and helps to nurture our knowledge; rather it helps to augment our accountability for others and keep us in the loop.I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the ensuing paragraphs.
First of all, it is our responsibility to help the nation if it calls for.Hence,if any natural disasters such us tornedo, devastating flood,conflagration take place we can extend our hands to those who get stuck in such catastrophes.world news offer us all the necessary information of incidents that are occurring around the world.In such situation,it allow us to reach to the people who are in need.Let me cite an example to shed some light on this.Recently, a state in my country experienced a devastating flood which rendered thousands of people homeless.To ameliorate the situation,millions of people all over the world stood by their side and provided them money,food and shelter to take them out of this imbroglio.And,they successfully overcame the adversity. Therefore, the news updates integrate people from all around the world which is the ultimate goal of humanity.
Secondly,it is pivotal to get acquainted with world economy as it helps us to understand the countries' current status quo.Profound understanding of global economy enables us to make prudent investments especially if we are going to start any business venture.Therefore, we should keep updated with news of stock markets,others financial related issues which control the prices of daily commodities.Because,ultimately it shapes and regulates our economic aspect.
Furthermore, news updates allow people to know the human capabilities to see beyond the horizon and provides access to nature beyond our thinking and imagination;these concomitantly make our lives smoother,faster,smarter.From news updates,we come to know of different technical know-how , groundbreaking works and their availability; those help us to take the advantages of such gadgets that,in turn,make us far efficient in accomplishing our jobs.
To sum up,considering all aforementioned factors,it is worth mentioning that having news updates foster our lives by enlightening and enriching different aspect of our lives.Moreover, it allows to perform our responsibilities in a global platform.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51898734177 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88651380867 2.67179642975 145% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551898734177 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.1344086022 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 204.286113886 48.9658058833 417% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.428571429 100.406767564 310% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.4285714286 20.6045352989 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.8571428571 5.45110844103 328% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.5376344086 596% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103747874251 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554623608056 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434981289604 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574178945359 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037420082851 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.8 11.7677419355 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.18 58.1214874552 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.1575268817 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.01818996416 139% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.0537634409 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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