As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
At this age of modern technology, people mostly rely on technology for performing their daily tasks and it makes the life easy. But the question whether the dependence on technology for executing the day-to-day works contributed to deteriorating the efficiency as well as the level of thinking of is of paramount importance. I disagree with the statement that the reliance on technology is resulting into decrease of level of thought process of human. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will try to elaborate why I disagree with the above statement.
Firstly, the new inventions of modern age have made the life easier. Now a days people can do different complicated jobs like the complex and lengthy calculation of the activities of banking activities, payroll systems, cumbersome calculations of scientists etc. can be done easily with the help of computer technology and this make the life easier than earlier. In past, people have to spend lots of time on performing these jobs, which is wastage of resources. Because using the modern technology, one can save valuable resources as well as valuable time and he/she can devoted that time to do other tasks which definitely will increase the productivity.
Secondly, uses of technology making the life of a professional relatively easier and he/she is living a comfortable. And if one has a stable mind then he/she have sound mind for thinking. The technology which are making our life enjoyable are also invented by some one like us. inventions are also the result of thinking of someone. For example, the discovery of air wave for transmitting voice as well as video signal resulted into the invention of mobile technology and all of us are well aware of the benefits of mobile phone in our daily life. Today, one person can communicate to his parents , relatives of distant place only by dialling a number, this has resulted into decline of anxieties about our family members. As a result, the people like me who live far from family for livelihood can concentrate on my daily jobs and definitely it has been contributed to the increase of my productivity.
Every inventions of this world have both positive and negative effect. it's very hard to find any things with only positive side. Similar to that uses of technology in our day-to-day activities have also some negative effects, which negligible. Sometimes, the over dependence on technology results into the decline of thinking level of human. Yet the positive effect of using technology in daily life surpasses the its negative effect. We should try to decrease the bad sides of using technology and should focus on maximizing the utilities of technology.
Finally, I disagree with the statement that over reliance of people on technology for problem solving has been resulted into the deterioration of ability of thinking level of human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...y tasks and it makes the life easy. But the question whether the dependence on technology for execut...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...f modern age have made the life easier. Now a days people can do different complicated job...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of banking activities, payroll systems, cumbersome calculations of scientists et...
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Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...this make the life easier than earlier. In past, people have to spend lots of time on p...
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Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'devote'
Suggestion: devote
...as well as valuable time and he/she can devoted that time to do other tasks which defin...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... relatively easier and he/she is living a comfortable. And if one has a stable mind then he/s...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...nd if one has a stable mind then he/she have sound mind for thinking. The technology...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ne person can communicate to his parents , relatives of distant place only by dial...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...have both positive and negative effect. its very hard to find any things with only ...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome negative effects, which negligible. Sometimes, the over dependence on techno...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'its'?
Suggestion: the; its
...sing technology in daily life surpasses the its negative effect. We should try to decre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2383.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07021276596 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87365087909 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470212765957 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1163119371 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.608695652 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171864326735 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534310970362 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054209047283 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12507662943 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722267428563 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.