Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Regarding the issue that whether the most advertisements make their products seem much better than they really are, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain the standpoint that the advertisements don't make the products seem better because they benefit few if the customers find their cheating. I partly agree with their notion. However, from my point of view, most advertisements are making the products looked better than they really are.
Firstly, they make the better image of the products seemed like to attract more customers to buy them. As we all know, the human being are the animals to evaluate a new thing based heavily on the first sight. If we think it is attracting us, we will put more passion on it,or on the other hand, we just go away.Take the ads of shampoo for example, almost all the ads about shampoo can give you a feeling like your hair can become as smooth as the hair of the model after using the same shampoo. In fact, all the pictures have been dealt with to make them look better. Once we see the perfect function of it, we can't wait to buy it.
Secondly,the advertisement about the products are often made better than reality to make the customer trust the advertisements. We can imagine when we first see a ads about a lock, it describes how firm it is and no thief can enter your home without breaking it. Your first impression must be the safety and reliability about this product. Then you have to buy the kind of clock in terms of the safety perspective. The advertisement have made a trick to have your trust and you are even likely to buy it again.
It is undeniable that sometimes the advertisements won't make the products seem better than they are because of the afraid of cheating the customers. But this method has become a typical selling way and no one can blame them if their product are really used well.
To sum up, whereas there is an argument for that most advertisements don't make products seem better than they really are, namely being afraid of cheating customers.Making the products more appealing to attract customers,coupled with getting the trust of customers makes a strong case for the fact that nowadays most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for example, in fact, kind of, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76844783715 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66342090214 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493638676845 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7299354196 48.9658058833 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374095934017 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132020059867 0.076458572812 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113751907142 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238109538578 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120766209669 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.