TPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
sTPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, one product has over hundreds of different kind of products from various company. In order to make high profit, each company utilize the best possible advertisement skill. With this and further reasons it will be mention, I believe that most advertisement seems more attractive than real product.
advertisement is developing as technology is invented. As times goes, each scholars are trying to refine and upgrade the old techniques to the latest version. Furthermore, the more better outcome they make the more support and chance to work for their ambition is gained through one genius result. companies are purchasing those technique or pay the suitable fee for the patent, they advertise product to purchaser. Because advertisement can satisfy all five basic senses of purchaser, like sound, sight, and even taste. With the comparison of the past ads, present tech is available to shows
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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sTPO 17- Do you agree or disagree with the f...
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...and examples to support your answer. Nowadays, one product has over hundreds ...
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...s more attractive than real product. advertisement is developing as technolog...
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Suggestion: Advertisement
...e attractive than real product. advertisement is developing as technology is invented...
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Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...to the latest version. Furthermore, the more better outcome they make the more support and ...
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Suggestion: Companies
...on is gained through one genius result. companies are purchasing those technique or pay t...
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Message: Did you mean 'this technique' or 'those techniques'?
Suggestion: this technique; those techniques
...genius result. companies are purchasing those technique or pay the suitable fee for the patent,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 1977.66487455 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 407.700716846 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44252873563 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76477402803 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.718390804598 0.524837075471 137% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 618.680645161 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3853652618 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.9166666667 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468208542782 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15159050368 0.076458572812 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155474772902 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300776885594 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136424235347 0.0645574589148 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.68 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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