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TOPIC# 27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing?
World is not an ideal place to think that we could only do our favorites and avoid doing tedious tasks. Actually there is something wrong with this idea. As far as I am concerned people should do things that they do not enjoy at times since they might be beneficial to them, and not anything pleasant is good for them. In the meantime, we might be wrong about some chores.
First, we should understand that not anything unpleasant is vain, most of them might have some short-term or long-term advantages for us. For example, it is hard for us to exercise, but we know that it keeps our body fit and...
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Sentence: To illustrate, a child who thinks math is boring, but his parents or teacher compel him to study, might find his main interest in mathematics latter in his life.
Description: The fragment teacher compel him is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace compel with verb, past tense
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 373 350
No. of Characters: 1653 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.395 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.432 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.472 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 98 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 54 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.65 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.382 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.519 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5