You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Invite him to stay and suggest a date. Briefly describe the new house and garden Say why you like your new house

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You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Invite him to stay and suggest a date.
Briefly describe the new house and garden
Say why you like your new house

Dear Mohan,

How are you? I hope you are doing well!
It’s been a long time since we met, the main objective of writing this letter is, I would like you to welcome you to my new house. A few days ago I moved to this house. If possible please take a break from your office work and come here during this weekend.

I would like to share the architecture of the building, it is three storey building including underground floor, and also, it has exquisite garden which has fantastic flower and herbal plants which can be used as remedies for chronic diseases such as blood pressure, and diabetics. Over all the garden is set with amazing views.

I am so impressed of my house beauty and convenience of it. House is so near to my office and I am not facing any hectic traffic while commuting to the office. In spite of this, when I come back from work, I feel so much peace and calmness because of beautifulness of my house and its garden inside.

I hope you will be here during coming weekend to share my happiness with you and look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours lovingly,
Srini

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, while, i feel, such as, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47783251232 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35951849443 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64039408867 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0501921867 44.8134815571 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25634004164 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890788066531 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652359611672 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135917382505 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651591490884 0.0580467560999 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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