Studies have suggested that nowadays children watch much more television than they did in the past and spend less time on active or creative things. What are the reasons and effects of this trend?
According to studies, in retrospect, youngsters did not spend much more amount of time on watching TV as in these days. Moreover, they are not interested in doing active and creative activities. To address this trend, there are several causes, and effects, which will be discussed in this essay.
Firstly, one of the main reasons of this issue is related to vivid and colorful television programs, especially animations. In fact, they are so addictive that children cannot get rid of watching TV, and they spend excessive amount of time to doing this unconsciously. It is obvious that in past time, there were no such opportunities to create these types of animations and children did not watch television a lot. In addition, as a result of technological development in majority of countries, televisions can be connected with internet, and satellite networks, which can provide television with the TV channels from foreign countries. Hence, children are more likely to confront with the most interesting programs. Another clear reason is that parents nowadays are busy with their job, and to them, the straightforward way for their children to focus on something is watching TV.
Regarding the impacts of this trend, there are both positive and negative results for children. It should be accepted that children spend much time on cartoons which are mostly based on science fiction in modern world. As a result of this, their imagination ability will become advanced, and they will think creatively. Moreover, science and technology will impress them so effectively that in future, they may become professional scientists. Nevertheless, watching TV a lot can contribute to several health problems. For example, TV screen emit the electromagnetic waves which can damage human’s eyesight, as interaction between eye and screen takes long time.
To conclude, as a result of parents’ attention to children and developed television contents, children nowadays are more likely to spend excessive amount of time in front of TV. It should be accepted that this trend can result in their benefit related to creativity, and also health problems due to screen effect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31594202899 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96102243393 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527536231884 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2806066343 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.882352941 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326192497594 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105274291329 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563025508209 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214897379164 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458694193326 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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