Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work. You should:
Describe the presentation
Why was it important
How did it help you
<p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Dear Shalini,</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">I am writing this letter to thank you for lending me your book for my presentation. This book helped me in many ways and I am glad to inform you that the presentation went well. Everybody liked the presentation and I was highly appreciated for my work. Moreover, the presentation was extremely comprehensive and covered all aspects of the topic.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Furthermore, your book “The solar energy” turned out to be crucial for my presentation. As the presentation was on solar energy, the results of various studies mentioned in the book were used in the presentation. Also, I got in-depth knowledge of solar energy with the help of this book. Interestingly, this book helped me with not only the content for the presentation but also the organization of ideas.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">In addition to this, I had adopted technical vocabulary from the book to make the presentation look more professional. Indeed this book was a great support.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Thank you once again for the help.</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Yours faithfully,</p><p style="margin-bottom: 1em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 18px; line-height: inherit; font-family: Arial, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; color: rgb(102, 102, 102); white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Name</p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
^^Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...or: rgb255, 255, 255;'>Dear Shalini,
Line 1, column 2245, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...he presentation look more professional. Indeed this book was a great support. ^^^^^^
Line 1, column 3010, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , ...rgb255, 255, 255;'>Yours faithfully, ^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2981.0 937.175257732 318% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 377.0 206.0 183% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.90716180371 4.54256449028 174% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 3.78020617076 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.48974222195 2.54303337028 216% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.336870026525 0.622605031667 54% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 736.2 290.88556701 253% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.41237113402 142% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 16.3608247423 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 366.076067915 44.8134815571 817% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 372.625 76.5299724578 487% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.125 16.8248392259 280% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.125 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719956922329 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883357546779 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663259257285 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719956922329 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.4 8.37731958763 470% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.07 70.7449484536 -14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 3.82989690722 475% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 7.45979381443 353% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 29.49 8.71597938144 338% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 33.5 8.62886597938 388% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 8.54432989691 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 8.15463917526 258% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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