Write a letter to a colleague who gave you a book that helped you for a presentation at work. You should:
Describe the presentation
Why was it important
How did it help you
Dear Sam,
Hope you are doing well and radiant in health. I am writing this letter to share the benefits of the book which you gave me last month about travel & tourism.
I am sure you understand how important it's to nail a presentation, before your annual discussion with management. However, the book you provided was a great help for my presentation on travel & different cultures accross the globe. book mainly described about travel and different cultures and their specific places to explore.
Such presentation about our industry, gives me opportunity to showcase my knowledge and possible insight for new development which adds value to our company. Indirectly i could mention managment my coming year plan of expansion through this presentation.
Your book mentioned successful case studies wherein it gave me clear path of how to work ahead and add revenue. Thus, it was a great help for me to impress management my understanding of the industry, potential direction of expansion and well executed case studies by implementing those theories in practice.
Hence, i would like to say, thank you for sharing such book and being a true mentor who wants to see me achieving pinnacle of success. Your contribution and support will always be close to my heart.
Your's Faithfully,
Deepa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well and radiant in h...
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Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... I am sure you understand how important its to nail a presentation, before your ann...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Book
...& different cultures accross the globe. book mainly described about travel and diffe...
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Line 7, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...h adds value to our company. Indirectly i could mention managment my coming year ...
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Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...g those theories in practice. Hence, i would like to say, thank you for sharin...
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Line 14, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o my heart. Yours Faithfully, Deepa
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20754716981 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86291139965 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4097883227 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282688859147 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958327106785 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889432834508 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153866896531 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906148787881 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.